Friday, 24 September 2021

My Writing This Week.

                                                        The  Scary Giants 


Once upon a time there were a big army of giants with big yellow suits there were Huge horns on there solder.They would use the horns to take away the tiny humans.And after one huge bag is fulled with humans they would do another bag till the whole village was empty.After the the whole village was empty they would run to there world that's called the big red lobster.The reason why it was called the big red lobster is because there was this really really huge giant that was always red and his name was lobster . Lobster was the king of all giants and if the giants wouldn't do what they were supposed to do they would get eaten alive by The Red LOBSTER!.The End

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 September 2021 at 07:38

    Hi Krystal, this is an interesting idea for a story, how did you come up with tis idea? I like the way you have use colours, it helps me make a picture in my head.

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  2. Anonymous21 October 2021 at 14:17

    Hi Krystal,
    I love how you gave so much descripton, so now im picturing your story in my mind.

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